Wednesday, August 5, 2009

the journey...


'the journey'
photography by sweetmango



i gazed upon your
half open mouth
and watched the words
drip
slowly
i caught them with my hand
and they stung a little
so i closed my fist
tightly
and lifted my hand to my mouth
and ate them
because the thing that burns you
burns me.

a bird darted past your head
and a feather floated
to the ground
landing beside your bare foot
we stared at it for a bit
then you closed your eyes
and slept yesterday
while i sat awake in the now
my pen pressed against the breast
of the pulp of the tree
that ate my words as
eagerly as i
consumed yours.

10 thoughts of PEACE on this PIECE:

Deborah August 06, 2009  

Magic. Simply beautiful.

epasen August 06, 2009  

Very beautiful, once again :) Your entries are lil moments in my days when I just sit and relax.
Emmi

Whitemist August 06, 2009  

I have miss you for a short while, you are very inspiring to me. Thank you!

Parv Kaushik August 06, 2009  

as usual.... lovely!!! its so full of imagery!

Kim August 06, 2009  

Luscious! The poetry and image take me away from the here and now.

TheChicGeek August 06, 2009  

Simply, beautiful.

Thank you.

xox

nollyposh August 06, 2009  

oh mygoodness your words Always make me cry, they Touch my Heart with a kind of Magic that i do not have the language for, so Beautiful are you <3

Italo August 06, 2009  

CIAO DOLCE MANGO, BELLE PAROLE :) BUONA GIORNATA

Cristina-Gabriela August 08, 2009  

Hey sweet mango! How are you? I'm on a virtual blog-walking to say hi to my friends. Hope this message finds you very well.

wish you a great week-end!

Crisa


PS. I like the soft music that I hear on your blog. is it so peaceful...Thank you!

kj August 10, 2009  

all i could think of when i read this was 'union': physical, emotional, spriritual, and my current favorite, sexual. :)

there is a nice buildup in this poem, sweetsweetmango.

xoxo

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