Thursday, June 11, 2009

Her...


by sweetmango
wax crayon

"Her"
Moon sat high
just enough light to see the
remnants of last nights
brief but polite thunderstorm
drips from the large oval leaves
like tears rolling off her cheek.
She walked down
the winding trail
each step was taken blindly
not knowing what was on the path ahead.
she stopped, she closed her eyes
and flew.

He handed her a box
a cold thing made of steel
a silver cage
and without hesitation she
put her hand inside
and took out his heart
and threw the box as far away as she could.
she placed his beside hers
she kept their hearts together
like she said she would
because she always keeps a promise
even ones made in the rain following a thunderstorm.

Ahead, down the path
glinting in the moonlight
she could see the ocean
swells heaving and rolling
calm and eternal
so she started walking again
singing to him over her shoulder
meet me by the water tonight
and behind her trailed
all the promises she ever made
because there's something about us
she said.

Where am I he asked
right here she said
as she touched her heart
and he closed his eyes
and the storm stopped
and he stood bathed in the
illumination of the low slung moon
and silver laughter, the colour of the moon
danced from her mouth when he tried to
return her heart
it is not yours to give to anyone, even me
and she closed his eyes and they flew.

15 thoughts of PEACE on this PIECE:

nollyposh June 11, 2009  

OMG!!! That is SOOOOOOO ~Beautiful~ SwEEtestMango <3
Write a bOOk! a beautiful tender book of ~Love~
So that we can all keep our hearts next to yours *Kissez* xox

Whitemist June 11, 2009  

Beautiful! Thank you.

Chrissy June 11, 2009  

OMG, this is beautiful.... the words and drawing .... yep, giving your heart to another as well as knowing that u have theirs is a feeling that is indescribable..... your words fit my situation...wow....

jinksy June 11, 2009  

Enjoyed this post very much indeed - can see umpteen illustrations as per kids fairytale pictures.

Lori ann June 12, 2009  

You put into words what I can only dream of.

you are a very special person miss mango.

love ♥ love ♥ love ♥

Deborah June 12, 2009  

Very special indeed. You write what the soul cries out...your words are living. Yes, a book of love. Why are you not published??? Sending you all my love, Deborah

Chrissy June 12, 2009  

stop by my page,, i am passing an award on to you
http://erickaleisbestfriend.blogspot.com/2009/06/how-sweet.html

repost if u wish

Kim June 12, 2009  

OOOOh. Peace to you. How lovely...I don't have words.

lolit June 12, 2009  

what a romantic poem,so meaningful! i suggest you make a book for all these poems you made together all your work of art,what do you think?

bLu eYd YoGi June 13, 2009  

quite gifted with words you are, my dear friend!!! ~ how is your lover-boy-poet? could he be any cuter?! I think not! could the 2 of you be any cuter? DEFINATELY NOT!!! I love you LOVING~ i LOVE you in LOVE~ i lOVE YOU! my lovely, lovely friend!!! you deserve nothing but the best~~ for the rest of your life! (a very special cupcake boy told me that a few months ago~ and it made my cry)~
we, you & i ~ deserve the LOVIEST, BIGGEST, GRANDEST, FLUFFIEST, LOVE~ topped with obbs, and gobs of cream cheese frosting & a bright red, luscious, juicy strawberry!!!
i love you my friend!
kisses & a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiig hug!
e.

The Pink Cowboy June 13, 2009  

Oh sweetmango!, you have taken me to a wonderful and mysterious voyage with this poem. It begs to be read by candlelight on a stormy night. Poets, I think,are magicians of sorts. I stand enchanted. This poem made me think about our human condition, our illusions and our desires. Thank you for the gift.
TPC

Parv Kaushik June 13, 2009  

both the words and the painting are exceptionally good... the words are breath taking!!!! this is tooo good!

keep blogging! loyal reader.. though m commenting fr the frst time!

Renee June 14, 2009  

Wow, the picture is super fantastic.

I love it.

Renee xoxo

PERUGINA ART June 15, 2009  

I love the words sm.. they tug at the heart and soul.. your wax crayon drawing if 'Her' is captivating and haunting.. i love it and the simple title.
I have to agree with most of the comments here.. you need to put these into book form.. Blurb is the ticket i think.
Love to you.
pg
:)

TheChicGeek June 25, 2009  

I agree with Perugina Art, the drawing is captivating and haunting at the same time. Absolutely gorgeous.
Your words....ahhhhhhh, perfect :D
xox

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